[BonoboSubs]Renegade Immortal - Xian Ni Episode 60 :: Nyaa ISS

[BonoboSubs]Renegade Immortal - Xian Ni Episode 60

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Date:
2024-11-02 15:13 UTC
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Anonymous
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12
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Homemade subs of Renegade Immortal (Xian Ni) : This release is not always an exact translation but scenes may have been transcribed in a way that is more understandable for an english speaking audience. This release also hopes to be as fidel to the webnovel as possible. My bonobos worked hard on this and they welcome feedback.

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  • [BonoboSubs]Renegade Immortal - Xian Ni Episode 60.mkv (1.1 GiB)
The translation is fine, my only comments is about English punctuations rules. There is no space no before ?, !, and : (colon — only French uses space before these). Your "bonobos" must be french-educated. lol ep 58, 19:12 He froze ... to death ? >>> He froze ... to death? ep 58, 12:27 ... 4 gates : Wind, Rain, Thunder, Lighting >>> ... 4 gates: Wind, Rain, Thunder, Lighting and ... (forgot where i saw this) missing comma 10 000 years >>> 10,000 years And thank you for the works, regardless.
I can confirm the bonobos learned french as their first language, that is why. Anyways, thanks for the feedback, I might overhaul the punctuation for a batch release.