Not to dismiss your efforts, but I feel like your font choices don't work very well. The karaoke font sticks out a lot (though the effects are nice). The translated song lines are a good clean font though. The dialogue font throughout the show is also much too fancy and stands out as well. It also has a weird slant to it. Compare your font choices to this release: https://nyaa.iss.one/view/999268. Notice how the fonts are simpler and yet also more pleasing to look at than your choices. Their dialogue font is easy to read, and their karaoke fonts are thematically appropriate, matching in color and tone.
Food for thought.
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